Showing posts with label subtext. Show all posts
Showing posts with label subtext. Show all posts

Monday, November 23, 2020

The Said and the Unsaid

What's "said" on the page includes dialogue, gestures, and observable behaviors.

What's "unsaid" includes what's beneath the spoken and observable--the thoughts and expressions that the character is holding back, or choosing not to say and do.

In a well-developed character, what's said will contradict or conflict with what he's holding back (for whatever reason), and if a scene isn't working, it may be because what's going on beneath the "said" isn't compelling enough.

Be Brilliant!

~Katie~


Monday, November 16, 2020

The Character's Inner World

In a story, the outer world is everything translated to the page that happens in a character's physical world. The people he meets, the words that she says, the actions he takes--these are all manifested outside the character.

But there is an entire inner world that should also be addressed, and this is what's referred to as the subtext. 

A character can't express everything in the outer world, after all; there are thoughts and feelings that are important she keep to herself for one reason or another. 

Of course, the outer world matters because the conflicts here keep the reader's pages turning, but this doesn't mean they aren't also interested in what's going on beneath the surface or inside the character's head. 

We don't always mean what we say or say what we are really thinking, and our characters shouldn't, either.

This makes the subtext--what's happening beneath the surface--an important part of our story and a great way to express conflict and add depth to our characters. 

Be Brilliant!

~Katie~